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1 Quick tips for longer posts on Thu Nov 14, 2013 12:59 pm

I wrote this in a rush for another member. Thought it would be nice to share it with you all. If anyone wishes to add their tips, please just put them in the comments. :3

Tips for longer posts

-Explore thoughts, history, feeling etc.

So "David was whined at the thought. His family were so far away and he felt so alone. This pack seemed nice, but could he really fit in. He wasn't sure."

It's got all three of those in there, but you can add more by talking about those feelings.

-5 sense- smell, touch, sight, hearing, taste.

"David could feel the breeze brush against his fur, the salty sea tickling his nose and the sound of waves crashing like symbols on the rock as he watched out over the sea. He could almost taste the sweet oranges that grew on the island.

- Reaction to things around them (which links in with thoughts)

"
"I'm gonna kill ya, David!" She bellowed as she charged at him, her fangs ready to kill"

He leapt to the side, almost smacking into a tree. Why was she mad at him? Did he do something wrong?"



Those are what I can think up so far. :3 Just keep practising. :3


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